I was wondering if anyone would like to be an editor for my story...

Here's my planned intro:

The 100th anniversary

It is midnight. The pieces have come together, and the celebration has commenced! With fireworks, waterslides, skydiving, and one groundbreaking discovery released to the public, it promised to be a day like no other! An hour later, the guests began to arrive.

The announcer stepped forward, and said, “Welcome! Welcome! To the hundredth anniversary of the war’s end!”

The crowd screamed in joy and excitement. As one man thought, ‘Every time this announcer comes, it’s one surprise after another! I can’t wait to see what he does next!

The announcer signaled the men in the back of the stage with a simple hand gesture, and they, being firebenders, lit the fuses of the fireworks. As they flew into the air, the announcer raised his arms in welcome, creating a spectacular sight indeed.

Once the crowd quieted down, the announcer stated, “As many of you know, I am Dasheng. Both in name and meaning! Today, you will receive the world’s first glimpse into the eyes of an earlier world…the world right before the war of a hundred years!”

Members of the crowd looked around, confused at what the man, Dasheng, was saying.

One man called out, “What are you talking about!?”

Dasheng called back, “I am talking about the journals of citizens, the logbooks of captains, and the letters of soldiers! I am talking about the writings of scholars! I am talking about the story of what happened, the years before the war."

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