Well its out, after much self-arguing I've made another fanon. Mostly just a break from The Black Shadow, not to say I'll never go back it. So far so good a guess a little misunderstanding with Firelord Avatar Suzon which was resovled. (Thanks The avatar and Vaznock) and I've got one postive review (Thanks to The avatar again) so lets just hope it all goes good.
You can find the main page here - Diary of a Soldier
The First Chapter here - The First Battle
The First Character page here - Fu Yong