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Here I am, for my second review in the FRS (A late one, at that)! I woke up Monday morning, and was like: "Oh, crap! I've got a review!" xD So, here I am, reviewing a very interesting fanon:, by .
Warning: Spoilers for Jump below.
Toph Beifong, esteemed Chief of Police, has been framed for murder, but the true murderer framed her well, even getting her arrested. Only one problem: the metalbending Police Chief can and has escaped any trap, but in this case, she had to kill six people to do it, and another seven just to see her best friend Sokka. Now, the prosecution has her charged with fourteen counts of first degree murder, and if anybody catches her, she'll be hanged for sure. She won't let that happen. She has to run, but first, she has to find and talk to her best friend first. And along the way, she'll make some decisions, some crucial decisions. And maybe, just maybe, she can drag her best friend along with her...
If anything, this is one of the best Tokka fanons I've read. Maybe on the entire wiki. There are some believability issues, but honestly, I love this story! The writing is amazing, and I was moping around the house for ten minutes (or so) after reading the first chapter (Really, AAA? Really?) because of how well AAA manipulates your emotions through reading his awesome stuff.
Average score: 9.0 Another 9.0! *standing ovation*
Tips for Azulazulazula: You are a great author, in all truth. Amazing, really. But to better your fanon, I'd suggest speeding up slightly, and (hopefully) adding some of our old Sokka into his character. Other than that, just keep writing! Good luck!
Who should read this? Anyone, really, who is looking for a good fanon. Bonus points for people trying to learn how to show realistic emotions through your writing, or manipulate them. >:D Even more bonus points for Tokka shippers! :)
Well, thank you, , for reading this, and thanks AAA for writing this awesome fanon! Glad you could join me for my second FRS review installment! See ya guys next time! -