Omashu Rocks here for another installment of FRS:The Omashu Scoop! Today's fanon isby .
Authors' Plot: Set directly after the end of "Out of the Past", The Vindicators follows Avatar Korra, Mako, Bolin, Asami, Tenzin, and Lin facing Amon's endgame, as they fight alongside new characters to defeat Amon and the Equalist revolt.
Plot/Storyline: I think an alternative ending to LOK is a brilliant idea, and this one in particular I believe will be really neat. Unfortunately, I was only able to read one of the three chapters. 9.3
Organization: Rass is a veteran. I didn’t expect to find any problems here, and I was right not to. It seems as though he has the entire thing planned out. 9.4
Creativity:To think up this whole storyline that could have easily been a better ending than the one that actually aired is genius. There's one spoiler I won't reveal that's really creative. 9.4
Action: Unfortunately, there was not much action in the one chapter that was available to read, but there was some dream fighting in the beginning. 8.8
Interest Level: I'm already hooked. I cannot wait for the next chapter! 9.5
Character Development: This was hardly touched on in the one chapter, unfortunately. 8.7
Believability: I think Rass nailed the LOK characters. One Bolin line in the first chapter actually made me laugh. 9.5
General Writing:There were a few grammar errors, namely some to/too confusion or just some typos that could have been caught and corrected with careful previewing, but the writing was generally good. 9.2
Average Score: 9.3
Note: All Scores Are Out Of Ten
What Rassilon of Old does right:
Like I said earlier. Character representations are brilliant in this fanon. I can actually imagine each of them saying what they say. Even the UNR Council, which has only been mentioned so far, acts in a way that we could all see happening. Also, the creativity is very impressive.
What Rassilon could improve on:
I have no idea if the author is planning on having more action or not, but there definitely needs to be more in the next two chapters, same with character development. Also, really check over each chapter before publishing to avoid any typos.
Who does The Vindicators appeal to? LOK fans who are disappointed in the way the first season actually ended. That pretty much sums up who would make the perfect fan of this story.