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Fanon Review: Chi-Blocker by A True Fire Ferret

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This review was conducted by the Fanon Review Squad and reflects our best judgment of writing and fanon authorship quality. Please don't take offense if the review wasn't positive. We always give advice!

Omashu Rocks here for another installment of FRS:The Omashu Scoop! Today's fanon is Chi-Blocker by FireFerret.

Authors' Plot: The story focuses on a 15-year-old girl named Akari, who has had her sister kidnapped by Equalists. In order to get closer to the Equalists, Akari disguises herself as a chi-blocker. Akari is also an airbender, simply by the chance that her ancestor happened to be in the right place at the right time.

SCORES:

Plot/Storyline: I wish the chapters were a bit longer, but the plot is pretty neat. I haven't read another fanon about someone infiltrating the equalists. 9.3
Organization: Bonus points for including the correct pronunciation of names. 9.5
Creativity: I can't say that there's anything super clever in here. I never really went wow, that's creative! (except maybe the format of a certain letter)8.7
Action: Very few fanons have action in the first chapter; this one did. I would urge the author to practice battle descriptions, however. 9.2
Interest Level: Although the shortness of the chapters can hurt the plot, it makes it much easier to read. 9.3
Character Development: I think ATFF does a really nice job here, with Akari's determination to find Irsa and Rizu's backstory, etc. 9.3
Believability: No problems here. In fact, some basic parts of the plot are even… realistic. Dare I say that about a fanon… I can imagine this happening. 9.5
General Writing: With a couple of editors, there really shouldn't be any typos. Unfortunately, I found a few. Descriptions are nice, however. 8.8

Average Score: 9.2
Note: All Scores Are Out Of Ten

What FireFerret does right:
I don't usually like first-person POV stories; in fact, I dislike them. This time however, the author manages to pull it off. I really like the storyline, and I can honestly say that I will continue to read after I post this review.

What FireFerret could improve on:
I mentioned that nothing blew me away creativity wise. Well, try introducing something gigantic that nobody has ever thought of before. To name a few examples, the Procession in BlackMonkey's The Avatar Rhythm, PSUAvatar14's Weatherbenders, or Kofaru in my very own Avatar Brek. Other than that, I highly suggest expanding the chapters. Think of how much can fit into one LOK episode.

Who does Chi-Blocker appeal to? It's actually easier to say who probably wouldn't be into this- users who only read a fanon based on the Avatar. (I'm not one of them) Other than that, everyone should enjoy this story on some level.

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