Fandom

Avatar Wiki

Comment1

Fanon Review:Those Bored Eyes (Mai's Story)

Ad blocker interference detected!


Wikia is a free-to-use site that makes money from advertising. We have a modified experience for viewers using ad blockers

Wikia is not accessible if you’ve made further modifications. Remove the custom ad blocker rule(s) and the page will load as expected.


First off, I must apoligize to Nathan Miranda for being so late on this review. I appreciate his patience greatly.

This week's review is Those Bored Eyes, a firsthand telling of Mai's experience during the story. Not much is to be said about the story, I can only recommend you to read an interesting view on Mai's take of the journey. Now on to the review!

Script: I've noticed that at times it doesn't match what's said in the actual episodes. With that exception, the script is believable and well written. 8.3/10

Story: The added information provide information that was left to be desired between the episodes. Well done. 8.5/10

Keeps You Reading: I had trouble continuing at first, but it has improved greatly over time. 8.4/10

Creativity: 8.6/10

Action: Short, but it covers what was shown in the series. 8.0/10

Character Development/Personality: Mai and Ty Lee are great. Nathan's writing excellently describes Mai's bland look at life, and also provides a hint about what might be really going on inside her head. Same with Ty Lee, in particular with her feelings about leaving the circus to join Azula. Azula seems a little out of character at times, but the rest of when she's seen is good. 8.1/10

General Writing: 8.7/10

Overall: 8.3/10

No offense is meant by the scores, this is only my opinion as a reviewer.

Next Week’s Review: A:TLAR by Lovelyb0nes

Also on Fandom

Random Wiki