I was lucky enough to get a review of my Anansi fannon. Needless to say I was quite disapointed only getting a 5.6 which lets face it, SUCKS! But in all fairness i'm still fairly new to this game so I don't take it too hard. My reviewer Typhoonmaster raised some good points though. My grammar and sentence structure are sort of lacking most of the time. I really can't help it and it is infuriating how that's holding me back so much. So that's a thing, also my character development....which i'm not sure how to expand given the story style. Not that it's going to stop me from trying mind you.
It wasn't all bad mind you, Typhoonmaster said my style and technique were good so it's not all doom and gloom. And in the end aren't they the most important things; after all grammar can be fixed but a bad story is a bad story. If you're interested you can read it here if you want http://avatar.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Typhoonmaster/Fanon_Review:_Anansi_by_Masri788
Anywho, I'm not going to let this demotivate me. I have a story to tell and as Aang as my witness I will tell it one way or another. So, expect an update sometime soon on the Anansi side of things.
Don't think I forgot about the Green man eiter :) I will admit though, I should have updated it by now. I have a story set up but given what I have learned, I don't feel comfortable with releasing it until I have given it a proper polish and run through.
So, reader keep an eye out for some amazing things because that's what I strive for.
Also, Man of Steel....very nice.