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Fanon Review: True Winds, Flowing Water by Lovebender110

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This review was conducted by the Fanon Review Squad and reflects our best judgment of writing and fanon authorship quality. Please don't take offense if the review wasn't positive. We always give advice!

Hey there, Mageddon725 here, reviewing True Winds, Flowing Water by Lovebender110 on behalf of the Fanon Review Squad.

Taking place approximately three years after the events of Sozin's Comet, True Winds, Flowing Water is a deep, poetic, descriptive story following Team Avatar in their struggle to maintain the peace and love they have fought so long to achieve in the world...and within each other.

As I read this fanon, I noticed a remarkable similarity to another. True Winds, Flowing Water bears resemblance to TAD’s famed A Bird Could Love a Fish, and I have enjoyed every chapter. The description, characters, and action all mesh absolutely beautifully. I think this might be well on its way to being one of the best fanons on the Avatar Wiki, and I don’t say that lightly.

Scores:

Story – 9.3: TWFW is yet another after-the-war piece, but the plot is so well executed that it overshadows that fact.

Action – 9.4: For a story with, as the intro tells, a focus on relationships and emotions, this one sure has a lot of action, and all of it is born by worthy description.

Writing – 9.7: Wow…just…man…when I said it was reminiscent of TAD’s work, this was what I was referring to. Apart from a few minute hiccups, this area truly allows TWFW to shine.

Creativity – 9.0: Lovebender is mostly building on what already exists, but does it so very well.

Believability – 9.2: The characters and story elements are all true to form, although a few lines caused me to raise my eyebrows in disbelief.

Character Development – 9.5: Team Avatar and their allies and enemies never seem out of place or contrived; each had their traits, established in the show, left intact.

Average Score: 9.4

Note: All scores are out of ten


Advice for Lovebender110: Keep up the excellent work; I have enjoyed every chapter. I would advise that you give your story an element or device that sets it apart, but that is a small complaint.

Who should read True Winds, Flowing Water? Everyone who considers themselves a fan of TAD’s ABCLAF should look at this one. You’ll see what I’m talking about.

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