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Fanon Review: Tales of Their World

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This review was conducted by the Fanon Review Squad and reflects our best judgment of writing and fanon authorship quality. Please don't take offense if the review wasn't positive. We always give advice!

Hey there, Mageddon725 here, reviewing Tales of Their World by Snip101 on behalf of the Fanon Review Squad.

Tales of Their World is about what life was like in the Avatar World. The series of one-shots depicts not only the adventure, but the everyday life stuff...and more.

Tales is a series (well…two at the moment…) of one-shots, a style that has become more and more commonplace. I feel that one-shots can often express aspects of characters that we rarely see and make for some really beautiful moments. That being said, I feel like only one of the two that have been written carried any real emotional weight for me.

Scores:

Story – 8.5: Both have very interesting plots, and they are both executed well, but The Death of Her Savior is arguably the better of the two. Snip should definitely add more one-shots to this piece.

Action – 9.0: Though only one of these little stories has any action, I cannot fault the action scenes I do find in it.

Writing – 9.1: The overall grammar and syntax is quite advanced in its usage; I only found a few minor missteps. Even then, those were more clunkiness issues than anything.

Creativity – 9.0: Fanons that consist of a series of one-shots are becoming rather common. Fortunately, I can say with some certainty that most of them are different from each other, simply because they are one-shots.

Believability – 7.0: I found that one of the two stories was excellent in this category, but the funeral left a little to be desired, as some of the characters said things in a way that didn’t seem all that believable to me.

Character Development – 9.2: I dare say the character development in the Death of Her Savior is done far better than in Life is Too Short, and it offsets that greatly.

Average Score: 8.6

Note: All scores are out of ten


Advice for Snip101: Keep writing these one-shots; they are exceptional. Just try and remember to keep characters…well, in character.

Who should read Tales of Their World? Anyone who enjoys a great series of one-shots, of which I hope there will be more, should definitely read this.

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