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Hey there, Fanon Review Squad.here, finally getting around to reviewing by on behalf of the
The series is a collection of one-shots that take place during the original series. It was inspired by Sokka's Days and The Lost Adventures.
Let me start off by saying (Man, I use that phrase a lot!) that very few one-shots catch my attention, simply because they do not normally have the depth of longer fanon pieces. With The Mini-Adventures, though, this is mostly avoided due to the fact that it is multiple one-shots. That being said, neither of the two that Ruler has posted has been particularly memorable.
Story – 7.0: Since these are one-shots, I don’t feel right about giving the story a bad score. However, the two that are currently out do not do much to enhance the world of Avatar.
Action – 5.0: There is very little action in these one-shots, just some Pygmy Pumas being chased by Sokka and the chaos that ensues.
Writing – 8.0: The writing in these two chapters is very good, but there are a few choppy areas. Other than that, this is done well.
Creativity – 6.8: One-shots like this have been done before, and this one has nothing to really make it stand above the rest.
Believability – 8.5: I will say this; Ruler uses the characters that have been given to us and maintains their personalities.
Character Development – 6.0: Once again, the fact that they are one-shots does not allow for much character development.
Average Score: 6.9
Note: All scores are out of ten
Advice for RuleroftheBisons97: You have a decent fanon going here. All you need to do is keep writing and strengthen your craft. Another good thing to do would be to write a one-shot that stood apart from the crowd.
Who should read The Mini-Adventures? Anyone who wants to know what happened to the Gaang in between the action should enjoy this fanon.