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Fanon Review: Avatar: The Legend of Mel by MateyY

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This review was conducted by the Fanon Review Squad and reflects our best judgment of writing and fanon authorship quality. Please don't take offense if the review wasn't positive. We always give advice!

Hey there, Mageddon725 here, reviewing Avatar: The Legend of Mel by MateyY on behalf of the Fanon Review Squad.

After Avatar Korra saved Republic City from the vicious Equalists, she retired and had a nice happy life. But, unfortunately, her time in this world was ended. All of the new cycle was started. The new Avatar was born, Avatar Mel. But with his birth, a new threat arose. The new Fire Lord was not like the last two Fire Lords, but had the dream that once her great-grandfather, great-great-grandfather and great-great-great-grandfather. And so she started a new, much more vicious war.

First off, allow me to apologize for the incredible lateness of this review; I’ve been swamped lately. Now, however, I can finally begin to catch up. The Legend of Mel is a story begun in medias res and told in first person, an element few fanons have. Matey writes well and, with the exception of a few grammatical and spelling errors, has crafted a fairly engrossing story. The aforementioned perspective allows for a closer look into the minds of his characters, a privilege that is somewhat less so in other perspectives.

Scores:

Story – 9.2: The idea of an Avatar (SPOILER!) without access to the Avatar State is an original one indeed. That being said, I think another war with the Fire Nation is overdoing it a bit.

Action – 8.5: Well described, but at times the bending could use a little more diverse description.

Writing – 9.0: Matey is an excellent writer, and that fact is made clear by the use of first person narrative, a feat that is difficult to achieve.

Creativity – 9.1: The story of the Earthbending Avatar after Korra has not been often explored. ‘Nuff said.

Believability – 8.2: The story is filled with believable characters and events, but there were certain parts that felt forced or rushed. Two examples would be Yangchen, whose character I felt didn’t quite match up with established canon, and the Mel/Hope dichotomy. I’m not a big fan of “love at first sight” kinda deals.

Character Development – 8.3: The characters in The Legend of Mel are set apart; they have their own distinct personalities. However, I feel like there is little growth. If Matey can build them into something greater, than this fanon in turn will become greater.

Average Score: 8.7

Note: All scores are out of ten


Advice for Matey: This fanon is great, but if he improves on two issues, it can rise even higher. Growth of the main characters is of the utmost importance for a story to grow; they are essential. The other issue, a smaller one, is the issue of the description of bending, which can get a little repetitive at times. Try and be a tad more creative with your descriptions in that regard.

Who should read Avatar: The Legend of Mel? Anyone who wants an original fanon piece with new characters and reopened wounds should give this one a go.

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