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Fanon Review: Aika: Illuminated by PracticalPabu

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This review was conducted by the Fanon Review Squad and reflects our best judgment of writing and fanon authorship quality. Please don't take offense if the review wasn't positive. We always give advice!

Hey there, Mageddon725 here, reviewing Aika: Illuminated by PracticalPabu on behalf of the Fanon Review Squad.

Over a decade ago, King Longwei's second wife - Sora - passed away, leaving him with no partner and the twins she had brought him a few years back. Aika, his daughter, will never forget that. And now, the memory is more crucial than ever. She's found out that she glows - and that is definitely either something to do with the Spirits, or a medical condition. She's also found that the cause of her mother's death might be a little more serious than she thought. So, Aika Saidao pretty much has to solve a mystery, stop the nightly disappearances, and right her father's city before she's taken to a hospital. Or killed. Mostly the second.

Aika: Illuminated is a great fanon that manages to stand out. The characters are all multi-dimensional, and the story pulls you in with each chapter. Apart from some grammar and spelling hiccups, Aika: Illuminated is a worthwhile read.

Scores:

Story – 9.3: Kidnappings and a dysfunctional royal family rule the day in this fanon, and every moment of it is intriguing.

Action – 7.5: There isn’t too much yet, but I expect that to change as the story progresses.

Writing – 9.0: The writing style is very well done, but there are a few instances of odd grammar or misspellings.

Creativity – 9.5: I can say with certainty that few have attempted a story like this, and the bending style prominently portrayed is interesting as well.

Believability – 9.6:Most of this aspect is so well built. I can tell a lot of thought went into this.

Character Development – 9.8: Each of the characters has their own life and multi-faceted personality, a feat that is incredibly hard to accomplish.

Average Score: 9.1

Note: All scores are out of ten


Advice for PracticalPabu: Just clean up your spelling and grammar. Also make sure to polish (and write more) action scenes. Other than that, keep writing. This is a fun fanon to read.

Who should read Aika: Illuminated? Anyone looking for something a little out of the ordinary, but no less exciting, should give this one a go.

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