This is my first fanon story, and I'm definitely new to the realm of fan-fic, so I want to know what people think about it. Please give me suggestions, comments, and... well, I guess that's it. But I really want some feedback from more experienced fanon writers! I'm only a fifth of the way done, but I want to know how I'm doing.

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