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  • I live in a place called New Zealand, a strange land in which Elves, Orcs, Hobbits, Dwarfs, Humans, and an overabundance of sheep all live.
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    Bomochu here, back again with the second instalment of the review for the Literature of the Duchy of Skibbington. Last time, we looked at five unique and diverse one-shots, so without further ado, let’s have a look at the remaining four shall we?


    No Bending in Class

    Well, I have to say that the premise for this story is not one I think I've ever seen. This AU has original characters, but instead of taking canon characters and putting them in a new environment this story takes the idea of bending, and brings it into our world.

    Plot: 6.1

    The story has a promising start, beginning with two classmates, Nick and James (the later the narrator), accidentally setting a hanky on fire and freezing it somehow during class. Later, the two theorise that the…



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    "Welcome everyone to the Literature of the Duchy of Skibbington. It is a collection of the finest one-shot literature in the Duchy, written and selected by me – The Duke of Skibbington himself. In other words, it is a compilation of all the one-shots that I wrote."

    Hello Avatar Wikians! Bomochu here and I'm back again with the pleasure of reviewing a collection of the Duke of Skibbington's one-shots here, collectively titled, 'Literature of the Duchy of Skibbington'. The blurb above is what appears on the central hub for the one-shots, welcoming readers to a diverse range of fanons written by Duke. For easier reviewing, the nine one-shots to be reviewed will be split into two parts and given a score for each, and then a total score, and the …



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    It's Bomochu back again with the second part to a review for ARG Presents. Last time we looked at four hilarious and enjoyable one-shots, so now let's take a look at the other four:


    Live Another Day

    Written for another writing contest, this time the prompt "Write an Epic Fight Scene", Live Another Day features a battle between Hakoda from the Southern Water Tribe and a 'mysterious' waterbender.

    Plot: 10.0

    Brilliant story! The plot twist at the end was unexpected and worked really well. The back-and-forth style of describing one opponent and their attack and then how the other countered made for an exciting and memorable story. A simple yet elegant story that serves its purpose well.

    Organisation: 9.9

    The whole setup for this fanon was superb; the surp…






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    Here's another review from Bomochu the Bombchu! For this one I had the pleasure of reading through a series of AvatarRokusGhost's one-shots collectively titled, ARG Presents. For easier reviewing, the eight one-shots will be reviewed in two parts of four, though there will be an overall score and advice section for each half, and one overall score for both parts. Let's take a look!



    The Consultant

    Set in between the events of The Chase, Team Avatar encounters a man known as 'The Consultant'. Exhausted after escaping Azula, the Consultant offers them advice which he claims will help them greatly in their battle with Azula, Mai, and Ty Lee. The hilarious thing about this one-shot is that the Consultant seems to think that Team Avatar are somehow in…







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    Well... It only took me about five months to finally review my first fanon! I do apologise for the delay; I'm anticipating that for the remainder of this year and next year things will be a lot less busy for me, and not only reviews but my wiki activity in general should be a lot better. But enough about me, let's have a look at Neo Bahamut’s fanon series, Republic City Renaissance!

    Because it's been a while since I did my test review, here's a little recap of what categories I use and what they mean:


    • Plot: The overarching story.
    • Organisation: The flow of chapters and the way the story progresses.
    • Spelling/Grammar: Any technical writing aspects.
    • Writing Style: Any non-technical writing aspects.
    • Characterization: How characters develop or are introduced…



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