I have been working on a fanon of my own for almost a year now and have tons to work out into Chapters. I have hit a dilema after typing up a rough draft of the first chapter. Is my point of view too vague? I have chosen to narate third person everything while following the main character. Should I be writing it differently to engage the audience a bit more with the character? I feel Narrating as a third person would make for better combat sequences but seeing as this is my first attempt at a fanon story I am unsure what really works best. Any thoughts?
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Here is the link to my fanons main page. Link
Thanks in advance.