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  • Sokka jr
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    Sokka jr

    So, have you finished Chpater 2 or do I need to do that?

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Sorry, I've just been so busy and my mom doesn't want me on the computer. You should just finish it, I think, so we can get it out as soon as possible. But make sure that in this chapter, Hikaze gets the note that he will be switched to the Southern Air Temple in the third chapter. Sorry again!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Its no problem, I just thought you were ignoring me ^_^

      Thats ok. So I've finished chapter 2. I think you will be very impressed with the character development. I also included somehting special, SOZIN makes a brief appearance ^_^

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      So I have a long car ride tomorrow (going to visit my aunt). I can write the 3rd, and possibly 4th chapter on the way. Do you want me to do that and then, you can write chapters 5, and 6.

      Also what do you think about ending the Book with 8-10 chapters. Possibly 8, but making the last chapter really long.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      That'd be great. How long is the drive?

      And yes, the second chapter was very goodliful.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      3hr drive, so hopefully I can get something done ^_^

      btw, I'm leaving for vacation Sunday, and won't get back til Friday the following week.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      THat's okay. So you'll be leaving on the 19th and get back on the 25th?

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Yeah, leave 19th, back 24th. So I'll try to finish up Chapter 3 today, and hopefully 4 before I leave, then you can work on 5 and 6. That sound good ^_^

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Yep. Great!:)

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Check out my sandbox, to see what I have so far.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      btw will you support my request to join the fanonbenders? please ^_^

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      I will do both, but it doesn't do anything. I'll try though.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Ok, so I've ran into a writers block for chaper 3 -_-

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Could you help finish Chapter 3 :)

      please

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      I've done a little bit of editing, but I have to get ready for a 5K and then I will do some more either tonight or tomorrow.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      ooooohhhh a 5k, that sounds fun. I'm running a 5k in september :)

      I've think I've figured out my block, I'm going to switch to Hikaze being moved to the southern air temple. then I'll come back to Kyfu in the Master state (I've started writing that part

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Well, this is what I though. I changed it form window to trapdoor, because window is violent, but he is going to be accidentally knocked out the window. Then it'll switch to Hikaze leaving and arriving at the South Temple. Then it'll go back and Kyfu'll be in the Master State, levitating outside the window. Either that, or he grabbed onto a rocky ledge. My stupid iPad deleted some of it, though, so we need to rewrite a bit.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      well maybe its not a window but rather a natural opening in the room with no glass, i just didn't know how to describe it. I guess is like a open cavern. I was hoping maybe to include Kyfu holding on the ledge and then he slips falls past the fog, and then comes up in a air sheild while in the master state. end chapter

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      But knocking him off the tower seems a little too violent for the Air Nomads. . .

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      but Gyatso knows that Kyfu will enter the master state. How about kyfu falls but is hanging off a cliff, then Gyatso comes to help him because he never went into the master state. Kyfu then remembers being told that right now he can only enter it during survival situations, turns away from Gyatso and lets go. Gyatso is in shock only to find Kyfu come up in an Air Shield in full master state awesomeness

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      That's kind of what I was thinking. He was accidentally knocked off, then hanging on the cliff beneath the fog and then epicness.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Yes it would be very epic if Kyfu accepted his fate and willingly fell off the cliff. Maybe we could end the chapter there, and then have the master state part in chapter 4 or finish it in chapter 3.

      btw should we rename 3 from deception to something else?

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Let's call it The State of Relocation, because Hikaze is relocating and Kyfu is mastering the state. it'll confuse people!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      ooooh that sounds really good.

      So we agree on my last statement will be how Kyfu goes into the master state. The only thing I need help with would be describing the opening in the room.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      It should just be a big window that he trips and then gets blown back by Gyatso accidentally and then falls out.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Ok, should the windo already be open?

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Ya!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Alright I'll get writing, I should have it done later tonight and I'll post it around 11-12. Don't worry some off our editors will be up to do touch ups

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      did you see Burning Air's nomination for outstanding writing in a new series

      Sokka jr give Henry a high five

      I just hope someone updates the awards page and adds it on

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Actually, can you not publish it till tomorrow? I want to check it out, chapter 3.

      High fives Sokka!

      I am so excited, because I have about five things on the fanon awards!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      I know right,

      well I was just going to update the sandbox, that way users don't know about it and only the editors can get to it

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      the only thing I noticed though was our nomination wasn't put on the actual award catagory

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      How do you do that? How do you make it so only some peeps can do it?

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      I don't understand?

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Hey I posted the Chapter 3 in the sandbox, only thing I didn't write was the part with Hikaze. Do you think you can help me out

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      I am going to fix some stuff with Gyatso and Kyfu, and then I'll have to go to bed. But I will work more tomorrow.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Ok, that's sounds good. I'll see if I can write the Hilaze part tonight. We really need the chapter to sound intense, just like the prologue, if we want any chance of wining the fanon awards, and get more subscribers

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Even if we don't win these awards, there is always next year and Fanonbending.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      yep, btw go check out the fanonbending page

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      I know. I added the userbox to my profile. Thank you Peaches!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      I'm going to add it now.

      I'm busy most of this morning with tennis practice, so I should be back on around 2. So I won't be able to work on the Hikaze part.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      THat's okay. I'm gonna be off for most of the rest of today. My school's festival is tonight, tomorrow, and Sunday. I am in the duning booth on Saturday! Yes!

      I should probably go on a run. . .

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Hey, just wanted to let you know that I released Chapter 3

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Also I will be out of town on vacation from the 20-24, so Chapter 4 is up to you. I'll be here tomorrow to discuss what should happen in chapter 4.

      This is what I thnk should happen.

      Start with Hikaze reaching the Air temple, try to tie in a small romantic moment when he says goodbye to Yoi. Gyatso greets them, and escorts Hikaze to the elders. The elders explain what will happen to him while he is here, and when he can go back. He asks a question about the Avatar, but the elders ignore him.

      TRANSITION: Kyfu wakes up in his room(the room he once shared with Aang), with Gyatso sitting on the edge of his bed. They have a discussion about how to go into the master state at will. He needs to look deep inside himself, and face his inner conflicts before he is able to contorl the master state.

      TRANSITION: During the night Hikaze wakes up, to find a messenger hawk at the window. He sends Sozin a message, saying he has made contact at the southern air temple. He says that he has reason to believe the avatar is there, but he will need time to confirm.

      TRANSITION: Kyfu wakes up in the night, think about what Gyatso said. He then goes and sits on his floor mat, and meditates. END

      What do you think? I know it was alot for one message.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      It seems pretty good. Sorrry I have been so busy, an old friend came to visit.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      I complete understand no worries, so do you want to stick with this plot for chapter 4

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Yeah.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      btw did you get a chance to ready chapter 3?

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Not yet. I will be going to bed soon, but I will do it tomorrow. . . or at least try :p

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      I think you will be impressed with the Hikaze part. I think I'm making alot of progress with my writing skills.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Oh, if you finish chapter 4 while I'm gone, post it in my sandbox. That way I can give it a quick look, and make any changes before we post it.

      Another addition to add to the end with Kyfu, is that when he begins to meditate, the Auora forms around him and lights up his room. END.

      This way we can start off Chapter 5 during the night with Hikaze seeing the blue light coming from down the hallway. Which makes him believe that who ever is in that room is the Avatar. Just a thought

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Okay.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Sup, I'm still on vacation but decided to check in and see how everyone is doing on the wiki. How's chapter 4 coming along? No rush if you haven't started, I'm just board. It has rained today so I didn't do much. How are you doing :)

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Oh congrats on becoming a rollback :) You deserve it. I still have a ways to go before I'll apply to be omin a rollback. I need toake some more qualitative edits and do some more anti-vandalism work :)

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Thanks! That sucks that you are bored. . .

      I haven't started. School starts tomorrow so my time will pretty much be cut back to weekends, therefore our fanon will slow down, sadly. But I'll try to start at some point.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Wow, I don't start school til sept 4, then I'll be limited to weekends as well. It's ok if you don't get much work done on the chapter I totally understand. Btw I hope burnin air hasn't got in the way of the sole woodbender. When school starts my goal is to write at least one chapter every 2 weeks, unless we get a lot of free time and just can't stop writing :P

      Good luck tomorrow with your first day I'd school :)

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Lucky. . .

      It hasn't gotten in the way much. I am suffering from Writer's block for chapter 6. :(

      Thanks! I will do well with my first day of 8th grade. GTG!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Ok, talk to you later :)

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Hey Henry, Just wanted to check in and let you know that I'm back from vacation now. Hope school is treating you well :). Btw if you want I was thinking about how to write our chapters more efficiently, I had an idea. Maybe I could write a rough of the chapter and then we can refine it together. That way we would get the chapters out quicker since I have a light schedule this school year (let's hope it stays that way :) So if you want I can write the chapter 4, that way you have less stress.

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Yeah, that'd be great. Thanks!

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Ok I'll get on it :)

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Btw you should support katorra's fanon in Fanonbending

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    • Henryjh98
      Henryjh98

      Okay.

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    • Sokka jr
      Sokka jr

      Hey Henry,

      I was wondering if maybe this weekend we could work on writing the next chapter of Buring Air togeather. This way we can include both of our ideas, since I've been mainly writing the past few chapters. And honestly, I don't know where to go with the next chapters :P

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