I noticed that you only have four chapters published, and my recommendation is that you at least have five chapters published before requesting a review. Would you like me to go ahead and review it anyway?
My thanks for the review. Everything is still coming together on the story so i wasn't expecting the story to get the best of numbers, but i plan to improve on as much as I can and hopefully everything will be explained.
That's right! Chapter 12 of The Kyoshi Chronicles called Battle at Caoyan Hill is out now for you to read. Comment what you think, I'd love some feedback. :)
It seems you put a lot of planning into this fanon, what with the whole backstory of the war and the splitting of nations. Was this hard for you to map out?
Right from the get go, without seeing it mentioned in the trivia, I got the biggest (and greatest) Firefly-vibe from this fanon. Great show to draw inspiration from!I just love that show! But did you draw any inspiration from any other shows?
This fanon starts from Ozai’s airship attack, meaning the events prior to this occurred as per usual. Can we assume Kento went on the journey with Katara and Sokka as part of team Avatar? What was he doing while Aang was learning all the element?
Will Katara and Sokka, or any of the Team Avatar characters, make a return? If so, what can you spoil for us?
Purely out of curiosity, but will there be any spirits/spirit world in this fanon?
Kento is the younger brother of Katara and Sokka, but he seems very mature. Is he presently sixteen? And what are the reasons for his maturity other than his contribution to the war?
Spree is the possible love interest I’m assuming. Maybe a mix between Zoe and Inara, haha. Is she at all related to someone from Team Avatar or is she purely original?
Also, is she a bender of any kind? And if so, is she any good?
Is there a major antagonist you can shed any light on?
Will crazy-ass Azula make an appearance? How major will she be in this fanon?
What is your favourite part about writing Avatar fanon?
Which universe/time period would you rather live in, the Avatar universe or the Firefly time period?
It was a litte rocky at the beggining, consitering the various locations and characters. But the plot line itself was always there. I decited early on that I didn't want the story about everything being happy after the Hundred Year War and created a more chaotic setting that history has shown us to be commen after a long war.
Ha Ha! A fellow browncoat! Yes, other shows and pieces of work were drawn from aside from A:TLA. Dutch, who was introduced in just this most recent chapter, was inspired by a character in the movie Wyatt Earp. Even real life locations and events inspired the story. Pat To, the village that Kento and Spree stop in during chapter four and five, was named after a hill in Vietnam. The Winter Deadlock, the battle at the very beginning of the series, was inspired by World War 1.
Kento got the short end of the stick when it came to the events The Last Airbender. He got left behind to watch the village and train in waterbending when Pakku arrived from the Northern Watertribe.
Yes! They will! All of them will make an appearance atleast once. Lets just say that the old flintlock weapons won't be around for long with Sokka's inventive skill.
I highly doubt it. Kento is not exactly the kind of person to belive in spirits, or even focus on the spirit world.
Kento is currently seventeen years old. Aside from combat experiance, it was stepping up and taking on responcibility in the southern watertribe and the loss of his mother that had him grow up so fast.
Oh ho, Spree is defently more Zoe then Inaria. I created Spree to be a companion to Kento, someone who understood the local culture even more then he did, and to do that I had to make her totally orignal.
Spree is an earthbender, and a very skilled one at that. She could go toe to toe with Toph and last far longer then anyone else would. Also she is skilled in using a blacksmithing hammer in combat as well.
The Fire Nation, and by extention Fire Lady Azula, are the main antagonests. Lets just say that the cease fire won't last very long with her in charge.
As i mentioned above, Azula managed to become Fire Lady, even though she is mentally unstable. Her role will be simmaler to Ozai's was in the orignal series.
I would have to say writing about bending. Bending and all its abilites has fasinated me for a long time, and I absolutly loved writing about it.
Ooh, thats a tough one. I guess I'd have to go with Firefly. The Avatar Universe is tempting, manly with the advancements in Legend of Korra, but no amount of bending can beat Serenity and Malcom Reynolds' personallity.
I haven't, it may take the rest of the week because I'm having to steal my schools internet. Sorry. But rest assured, I will have the questions for you by mid next week
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Indeed it is. I like the way you incorporated Dark Tower references into your fanon.
I am currently writing my first fanon. 4000 and some words in. I also have some references from the dark tower series. Just not as major, simple lines and a theme. Pretty cool stuff!